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Girl of My Dreams by ~L33t-Ninja:iconL33t-Ninja:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


The girl of my dreams,
Actually does live.
But, as much as I want,
She is out of my grasp.

Although I have known her
Only a short time,
I wish to be with her
A very long time.

I know it is foolish
For me to think this
Will come to pass.

I know there are reasons
Why this will never be.
But even though they are concrete
I wish they wouldn’t be.

She is a Senior,
Her last year at my school.
She is a Senior,
Yet I am not.

I am single,
Looking for someone to hold.
I am single,
But She is not.

So I know this can never be.
I know it can never be.
But blindly I look.

So blindly in fact,
That I don’t look.
I don’t look for the ones
Who might think the same of me.
©2005-2009 ~L33t-Ninja
:iconl33t-ninja:

Author's Comments

I was thinking tonight. This is what happens when I think. Sometimes I wish I didn't think as much.

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~matsaada Feb 10, 2005, 6:32:00 AM
this is briliant,very well worded in the end,take a look at my newest piece when you get time.
:iconseisama:
~seisama Feb 10, 2005, 2:05:18 PM
.......
wow

that's very........deep in fact to deep for me

my very not-to-thinkable mind is now .....(whats that word) stupified....

yea
its a good poem


but any way
THERE WASA MAN NAMED BOB HE HAD NO JOB HE LIVED IN A TRALER PARK WITH HIS MOM!!!!!!!!
k bbye! ^ ^

--
Here's my two cents. Well, not really.
:iconsmilebomb:
~smilebomb Feb 10, 2005, 6:48:21 PM
Sei is right. That is very deep...It's awsome! ^_^
:icond-teh-vampire:
~d-teh-vampire Feb 10, 2005, 8:44:24 PM
you can write poetry my god

--
(\__/) --Nerdgasm.. yes thats right Nerdgasm
(-.-! )
(V V ) --god aint gonna help you

--you know Coke cans are red. Like communism

--i'm Jesus
:icond-teh-vampire:
~d-teh-vampire Feb 10, 2005, 8:45:37 PM
wow thats touching damn why cant i express my emotions like that

--
(\__/) --Nerdgasm.. yes thats right Nerdgasm
(-.-! )
(V V ) --god aint gonna help you

--you know Coke cans are red. Like communism

--i'm Jesus
:iconl33t-ninja:
~L33t-Ninja Feb 11, 2005, 4:33:55 PM
Because You don't have emotions.

--
“When the intelligent, fearing interaction with the ignorant, choose silence over contribution, thus begins the censorship of intelligence.”
:icond-teh-vampire:
~d-teh-vampire Feb 11, 2005, 7:43:31 PM
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Hmm your right, oh i got tales back

--
(\__/) --Nerdgasm.. yes thats right Nerdgasm
(-.-! )
(V V ) --god aint gonna help you

--you know Coke cans are red. Like communism

--i'm Jesus
:iconmelidona-haiebieto:
~melidona-haiebieto Feb 11, 2005, 10:21:10 PM
awww! that was kawaii ty! hummm...you should at least get her name and 'ecome friends ya know, that realationship she'd in may not last! go get 'em!

--
I have three voices in my head.
Suigie, Alex, and Mooshka.
One says yes, one says no, one only says mooshka.
So I'll only stabe you once and make it count.
:iconmelidona-haiebieto:
~melidona-haiebieto Feb 11, 2005, 10:22:30 PM
*after thought read other one first* I really like the lay out you have on the poem. Most just go every line and don't have anyformat at all! good poems and all but not very visually apealing, this was!

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I have three voices in my head.
Suigie, Alex, and Mooshka.
One says yes, one says no, one only says mooshka.
So I'll only stabe you once and make it count.
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